Patricia Grantham

Silver Star - 3,770 Points (Moncks Corner, South Carolina)

Love Potion - Poem by Patricia Grantham

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Love has cast a spell on me
Drowning in its deep blue sea
Mesmerized by a love so true
Fresh and sweet as the morning dew

True love will last forever
Will never ever say no
None can even try to sever
Only meant to grow and grow

My love for you will never die
It was made just for you and I
Our love and trust will always be
Love has cast a spell on me


Comments about Love Potion by Patricia Grantham

  • Rookie - 418 Points Elena Plotkin (8/26/2013 1:10:00 PM)

    Mesmerized by a love so true\Fresh and sweet as Morning Dew\True love will last forever\Will never say no. I love the imagery your poem evokes. Achingly beautiful. A perfect ten! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 296 Points Joseph Anderson (7/26/2013 1:34:00 PM)

    A mesmerizing poem. Brief and nearly hynotic in presentation. The comments should tell you.
    Love has cast a spell on me-great line. Someone is very lucky (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,248 Points Valerie Dohren (7/16/2013 3:12:00 PM)

    A poem full of love - delightful write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 20,480 Points Valsa George (7/15/2013 11:32:00 PM)

    A lovely potion which I have drunk to the lees! Enjoyed! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Sj Holland (7/15/2013 4:25:00 PM)

    I like the identical 1st/last lines. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (7/15/2013 11:46:00 AM)

    You make potions by mixing together different elements.
    So a love potion would be the mixing of emotions, time, and endearment. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 349 Points David Wood (7/15/2013 11:17:00 AM)

    Love casts a spell that we are all under from time to time. A good write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (7/12/2013 4:45:00 AM)

    so romantically penned.true love and true lover will be last for eachothers.although the aging or time separates them.
    ~nb (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,576 Points Neela Nath (7/4/2013 8:29:00 AM)

    Wow! So nice thought! Love and love. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,726 Points Dinesh Nair (7/3/2013 9:47:00 PM)

    Let the spell of love last for long as in true love nothing is impossible Patricia. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 194 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (6/23/2013 11:45:00 AM)

    Well penned poem, love all the way.
    Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 613 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (6/23/2013 10:34:00 AM)

    Love Potion is a beautiful poem which every one can relate to.! The rhyming is music to the ears.a wonder ful poem Patricia! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,338 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/19/2013 4:51:00 PM)

    True love will last forever
    Nicely stated. Love never dies. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,761 Points Heather Wilkins (6/19/2013 4:09:00 PM)

    love has cast a spell on me. nice thought. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 349 Points David Wood (6/19/2013 5:06:00 AM)

    Love is a many splendid thing, as the song goes. This is a lovely poem and would make a good sonnet to if you chose to write one. Have you read any of my sonnets? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Passionate Reader (6/18/2013 1:17:00 PM)

    My love for you will never die
    It was made just for you and I
    Our love and trust will forever be
    Love has cast a spell on me

    beautiful lines! ! ! yes love works like magic and casts a spell... enjoyable poem! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,248 Points Valerie Dohren (6/18/2013 12:58:00 PM)

    Delightful little poem Patricia - gave me an ah moment. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,505 Points Ken E Hall (6/17/2013 4:31:00 AM)

    Love has cast a spell on me, cos' your worth it...luvli to read nothing in the planet as good as true love. Even birds
    have it and the pet dog too all true...regards (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,338 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/16/2013 10:11:00 PM)

    True love will last forever. Beautiful love poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (6/16/2013 11:35:00 AM)

    Awesome, check out Stardust. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 15, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 24, 2013


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