Patricia Grantham

Freshman - 1,369 Points (May 27,1952 / Moncks Corner, South Carolina)

Love Potion


Love has cast a spell on me
Drowning in its deep blue sea
Mesmerized by a love so true
Fresh and sweet as the morning dew

True love will last forever
Will never ever say no
None can even try to sever
Only meant to grow and grow

My love for you will never die
It was made just for you and I
Our love and trust will always be
Love has cast a spell on me

Submitted: Saturday, June 15, 2013
Edited: Thursday, October 24, 2013

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  • Rookie - 72 Points Elena Plotkin (8/26/2013 1:10:00 PM)

    Mesmerized by a love so true\Fresh and sweet as Morning Dew\True love will last forever\Will never say no. I love the imagery your poem evokes. Achingly beautiful. A perfect ten! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 84 Points Joseph Anderson (7/26/2013 1:34:00 PM)

    A mesmerizing poem. Brief and nearly hynotic in presentation. The comments should tell you.
    Love has cast a spell on me-great line. Someone is very lucky (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 737 Points Thomas A Robinson (7/15/2013 11:46:00 AM)

    You make potions by mixing together different elements.
    So a love potion would be the mixing of emotions, time, and endearment. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 85 Points David Wood (7/15/2013 11:17:00 AM)

    Love casts a spell that we are all under from time to time. A good write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 85 Points Nader Baheri (7/12/2013 4:45:00 AM)

    so romantically penned.true love and true lover will be last for eachothers.although the aging or time separates them.
    ~nb (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,196 Points Dinesh Nair (7/3/2013 9:47:00 PM)

    Let the spell of love last for long as in true love nothing is impossible Patricia. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (6/23/2013 10:34:00 AM)

    Love Potion is a beautiful poem which every one can relate to.! The rhyming is music to the ears.a wonder ful poem Patricia! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 85 Points David Wood (6/19/2013 5:06:00 AM)

    Love is a many splendid thing, as the song goes. This is a lovely poem and would make a good sonnet to if you chose to write one. Have you read any of my sonnets? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 85 Points Passionate Reader (6/18/2013 1:17:00 PM)

    My love for you will never die
    It was made just for you and I
    Our love and trust will forever be
    Love has cast a spell on me

    beautiful lines! ! ! yes love works like magic and casts a spell... enjoyable poem! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 773 Points Ken E Hall (6/17/2013 4:31:00 AM)

    Love has cast a spell on me, cos' your worth it...luvli to read nothing in the planet as good as true love. Even birds
    have it and the pet dog too all true...regards (Report) Reply

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