***love Never Grows Old*** Poem by Dr subhendu kar

***love Never Grows Old***

Rating: 5.0


It is the rain by the evening hours
Shower when rocks up the walks
I lie lonely amidst the chilled snow
yet delicate scent riddles the crowd

the flavor of the wetly flower reels off adrift
trees and the leaves seem to swoon sigh
thirst of summer’s cry all reasoned to quip
onto the day of its ecstasy rooted to bleat
as I have been tingled wet by rains of blue

Still I tremble indeed by the tine of fear
Love still blemishes the fallen tears
Lest be not lost into the reeks of the fire
I know you may tender me by listless queries
Sun when hides beyond and beneath tonight

embracing the dream on the sprain of pain
I love to lie low in the room of the remorse
let the novels tonight be the memoir of yours
dream when roars moon still hanging high
love never grows old even by the ruins in smile

dream as happens to happen by the passion
no matter of being far away as I am by your grace
arm of love when soft and subtle flows entwined
over the meadow of the green bestirring by grin
ins and outs of world when transmute to rain

birds flutter when eyes stray from its door
as half breathed bone and half transpired
path when wound from love to hate
roots of deep sea ruefully return home
but love never be grown old even disowned

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 25 March 2010

‘…embracing the dream on the sprain of pain… love never grows old even by the ruins in smile…’ Wow! ‘Embracing’ …’sprain of pain’…picturesque imagery…in what you’ve all time mastery. Even Love glitters in ‘ruinationrains’ of ruins … S :) milingly 10 + :) Ms. Nivedita UK

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Niken Kusuma Wardani 21 August 2009

It's right, love never grow old, but it might fly away to move. I Love most of yr words which you bind in every lovely line, tks for sharing.

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Miriam Maia Padua 10 January 2009

wisdom write...with wonderdful thoughts...like a masterpiece carved well before presenting...words so touching.. ...Love really never grows old even disowned...the real love on its meaning.. love in the true essence of loving....divine... ....amidst everything......unconditional...no IF's.....10+++++++++++

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V Ramkissoon 09 July 2008

your writing is superb Dr.. ;) Some of them are beyond the limits of my comprehension though. but i really enjoyed this one. il read some more. :)

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Dr subhendu kar

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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