Palas Kumar Ray

Rookie - 203 Points (India)

Love N Hatred


When you say you Love
Father n Mother
Brother n Sister
Son n Daughter
Him and Her
I see you lie.
Whom you actually Love
is always ' I '


When you say you Hate
Father n Mother
Brother n Sister
Son n Daughter
Him and Her
I see you lie.
Whom you actually Hate
is always ' I '






© Palas Kumar Ray.All rights reserved.

Submitted: Thursday, June 12, 2008
Edited: Saturday, June 07, 2014

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  • Rookie - 69 Points Sadvansha Munshi (3/31/2014 1:54:00 PM)

    true! at the end it's always yourself which you love the most.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Paige Galloway (10/14/2008 11:03:00 AM)

    I agree with you, this is true. Its not others that life begins with. Changing feelings alway begins with you.
    10! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (10/9/2008 4:47:00 AM)

    This a different type of interesting poem.
    Love it,10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Reetesh Sabr (9/29/2008 9:54:00 AM)

    it takes us inside to peek within
    can't resist to be ur fan dada

    Indeed, Improvement begins with an 'I' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Koyel Mitra (9/23/2008 4:18:00 AM)

    Very insightful.A 10! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mamta Agarwal (8/28/2008 9:29:00 PM)

    simply lovely. love is ambivalent. deep philosophy here.10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (8/26/2008 1:01:00 PM)

    This is great poetry and a wonderful jewel. I have chose it as a favorite of mine.
    This is a special writing by a special writer.

    GW62 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 575 Points Saint Cynosure (8/3/2008 4:51:00 PM)

    This is excellent, a sure fire 10... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jennifer Wilmer (7/28/2008 1:14:00 PM)

    Beautifully written.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sumita Datta (7/14/2008 9:26:00 PM)

    Never feel shy to say... I.... Really very practical writing... :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 62 Points Kesav Easwaran (6/21/2008 5:37:00 AM)

    although mathematically imaginary phiolsophically real the 'i' is always there....constant. the others as palas tells us are all temporary...a good poetic vision (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 317 Points Subbaraman N V (6/19/2008 2:09:00 AM)

    It sounds paradoxical! Yet may be true! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 43 Points Raman Savithiri (6/13/2008 2:17:00 PM)

    Good! great wisdom and insight. Typical Indian mind! Welcome to Poemhunter. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Onelia Avelar (6/13/2008 5:08:00 AM)

    You mean the self loving and self hating, the omnipresent Ego, yes? Whatever you mean, the poem is well written, with a good rhythm...and a true insight after all... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vidi Writes (6/12/2008 12:43:00 PM)

    Its this contrast
    keeps us in confusion
    Its this confusion
    keeps us perplexed
    How to come out of this
    love and hatred relation with self?

    You have shot at the right point
    Making your readers to scratch and grasp.

    Very well composed. Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sumita Datta (6/12/2008 9:31:00 AM)

    What you have written... that people will dare to write... i liked this piece of work... :) (Report) Reply

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