Love Me Right Poem by Natasha McGee

Love Me Right



I cried over you day and night
Wondering if my love wasn't right
I was broken-hearted over you
Even before you said were through
I wanted what we had to never end
And then I thought how it begin
With a simple deposit in hand
I looked at you and I couldn't stand
You looked at me in such a way
I still remember that look till this day
I remember when we first kissed
I thought to myself this is it.
Then you couldn't communicate
Despite the kisses and the love we made
I tried to get you to speak to me
But that hard when others tried to see
You told me there are things going on
And that interfernce made things go wrong
You didn't put your trust in me
I tried so hard, but you wouldn't let it be
I lost my mom and you weren't there
I wondered how much did you care
We made love so time ago
The wining and dining you wouldn't let go
I thought to myself, I such a fool
He can't love me the way I want he to
He's busy with his other life
The business, the women and even his wife
I thought to myself just give it time
He couldn't love me he didn't know how
The days would go by
Wondering who your with and I would cry
I loved you more than words could say
But you didn't trust me in anyway
I wasn't the enemy now you see
Your so dam stubborn even towards me
We had a baby boy you know
You didn't ask questions and now he's 4
You wouldn't give your heart to me
The inner love you couldn't see
I know there is more to you
You blocked me out, then we were through
Though the years I longed for you
The kiss, the hug and just loving you
Not the money, not the business just the two
So now your back in my life
And you want to make me your wife
Can you love me the right way?
The pain of the past gets in the way
I wonder how you might be
You grew a brain you spoke to me
I remember how mean you use to be
Even though I wanted to keep the peace
I never been loved like that before
I was hooked on you and wanting more
It was something and I can't explain
The love making was off the chain
But you wouldn't listen to your heart
And I kinda realized that from the start
Being with you made me complete
And you felt it to, but you wouldn't let it be
So now we have a second chance
To express the love from the past
I need to know if you can love me right
Not the past demons you have to fight
I afraid to give my heart to you
Knowing the past and saying were through
I loved you I think from the first time
But I had to wait, till that night
I'm willing to take a chance
For you to be a friend, not just my man
I know you have to have your way
Can you love me the right way
Time will tell that for me
If we should be together till eternity
I still love you I want you to know
I was never the one for letting go

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Clarence A. Graham, Jr. 12 January 2007

I hope everything turns out right. With Divine Love, Clarence.

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Howard Johnson 05 January 2007

This is one of the longest writes I have read in a long time, I felt a lot of pain and sadness in it, I wish the best for you and your healing, Angel..

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