Love Me Please... Poem by BIBHAKAR DUTTA

Love Me Please...

Rating: 5.0


love me please,
I am lost,
I am hurt;
I need a true love.
I am drowned in a dark
kingdom of bad luck.
I need to swim out of there
by your holy love.
My heart has become foul,
I can't tender my love
as it's full of dust.
Only you can make me proud
by your love which is very soft,
pure and bloomed.
Be my love dear-
don't hesitate,
just feel and deem;
I always value your esteem.
You will be my fortune
if you accept my tune.
Love is just like a shadow
if I wait till tomorrow...
I need it just
now to meet you on second-life
to finish the sorrow.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ibnu Din Assingkiri 29 September 2013

inspiring write. mellow and yet inspiring... :)

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Prabir Gayen 12 December 2018

God is there always to embrace you..you are dirrounsur by love of the Almighty.....very beautiful poem to ask love from beloved the great.thanks

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Chinedu Dike 02 November 2017

A yearning for love - a voyage of pure bliss, is aptly captured in the piece. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Dutta and do remain blessed.,

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Bibhakar Dutta 03 August 2017

Thank u for your valued review for the poem......

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Rajnish Manga 03 August 2017

It is a poem of faith and yearning for love which has the potential to defeat 'a dark.... kingdom of bad luck'. Thanks for sharing this philosophical poem. I quote: Only you can make me proud by your love which is very soft, pure and bloomed.

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 July 2017

I am lost, I am hurt; I need a true love. I am drowned in a dark great desire to love and to be loved. this is our basic quest........ of every human being. in our darkness a little bit of love can give us a resurrection........ tha nk you dear poet. tony

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Malda, West Bengal, India
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