Love Making Love Poem by Leila Kay

Love Making Love

Rating: 4.5


Fingers mesmerizing cool and soft against skin
Tongues softly seeking whipping tasting lingering
Arms clutching holding wrapping enfolding yearning
Love making Love

Bodies yours to mine moulding wanting
Caressing touching electrifying
Silken subtle gentle
Wild and wonderful
Feathered touch
Crushed rose petals

Breaths heavy hot hard
Molten Volcanic
Fiery delight

Essence of love
Passion
Unforgettable irrisistable unimaginable

Lavender Chamomile Jasmine
Sweet sultry
Amazingly beautiful

Fantasy Dream Reality
Love making Love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 03 May 2007

Hot under the collar here Leila, you express the closeness so well here, sensual and beautifully done Love duncan x

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Marvin Brato 09 October 2007

Love making love....a romantic romance creating lovingly love a reality so real! Great write, loved it. Top mark

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Ashok Kumar 21 July 2008

Nice. It looks like imagination has given way experience.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 29 April 2007

Very passionate indeed Leila, what a picture you paint too... andy x

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Duncan Wyllie 03 May 2007

Hot under the collar here Leila, you express the closeness so well here, sensual and beautifully done Love duncan x

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Andrew Blakemore 22 October 2019

Nice imagery created here Leila

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Nkosilathi Zinyane 05 August 2019

love making love beyond the control and conception of the human... love makes love... great poetry great words.

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marvelous poem, giving me the mood of the poet thank you for shearing.

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M Asim Nehal 22 November 2018

Superb Passionate poem on love making.10+

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John Dent 28 September 2018

the voice reading the poem does not do the poem justice. please more sensuality.and PASSION

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