Love Makes Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Love Makes

Rating: 4.8


I got no where
She was somewhere here
I tried to concentrate
But failed straight

Why is she riding in my head?
Preventing thoughts to lead
Come to terms with reality
And show the best quality

I feel I am drawn
And literally down
With her impressive show
I shall love to fall down and blow

It is her picture
That moved in mind for sure
I make the pen to move with finger
No words come out to ensure

I make pen down
And seriously feel blown
Why love makes us so stronger?
I have no answer

Sunday, December 14, 2014
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 01 November 2022

A beautiful poem.... liked it dear poet. Top score.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 14 December 2014

wonderfully crafted... It is her picture That moved in mind for sure I make the pen to move with finger No words come out to ensure very nice thanks for share

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Savita Tyagi 14 December 2014

'I got no where. She was some where near.' Not to be able to concentrate, so natural expressed so well.

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Mohammad Skati 14 December 2014

I felt all those pretty lines of poetry. Thanks.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 December 2014

I got no where She was somewhere here

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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