Love Life Poem by Leila Kay

Love Life

Rating: 5.0


Life is a to be discovered dream
Unforsaken waiting to be awakened

Love is an uncherished moment yet to be tarnished
by heartbreak

Love is a fragrant promise unbroken
Like the irridescent prism of love

Life is a momentary transition
Like the falling of the dewdropp from the blossom

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 02 May 2007

I vote on these two lines only, as they are more than enough for me, just brilliant! Leila Love is a fragrant promise unbroken Like the irridescent prism of love Thankyou, love duncan X

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 29 April 2007

Ah Leila, you sound so much like me... Yes love life to the full, never grow up and never listen to poeple who say your to old, what do they know when your forever young in the soul.. andy x

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Hazem Al Jaber 07 April 2007

life and love.. life created only because of the love.. and life without love, there is no life.. love is the thing or the point which change all you life and path in this life and gives you a power to live and to love it.. even if that, gives you some pains, but sure on the end of your waiting will gives you the happiness which you created for.. so beautiful work my dear leila.. you are a great writer.. yours hazem

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