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Unwritten Soul


Love Lantern


Fire of Love
Burning in the sun
And I already done
Burned in this emotion
In the warmest flames
The heat that revives spring
Iced heart melted to flow blood
Awakening evergreen smiles
In sensational burning
I am burned, I am burned
In this infectious fire
Fire of Love

Fire of Love
Dearly taking over me
Warm soul flames my mind
By a strong love lantern spell
Miraculously touching bright
It burns and burning endlessly
Till the dark be a liquid shine
To fit spaces inside the chest
Mold in shaped of my heart
In a purest form of light
Sharpen it's rays
O my soul hold them tight
Be now you are my arrows of light
Hit a touch that turn bright
The love lantern arrows
My arrows of love light
Warned to not stare my eyes
Or to read my words
As if it shot by these strings
You will burn, forever burned
In this fire
Fire of Love

Fire of Love
From my heart
Soul pulling magical string
Aiming center of your emotion
Middle of heart in you it lies
Would you count your breathe
Calmly three to one
And I shall release one
On you, on you...
Through the mystery eyes
May it Illuminates your mind
Brightening the thoughts
Of your dark embrace
A widen Celestine dark
Scattered with stardust
When i shoot softly in you
Let the light taking over
Shattering the odd fortress
In evenly brine pieces
That lead us a secret door
A way we may find warm
With my love lantern
In continuous flames
Fire of Love

Fire of love
If you afraid of burning
Hide your heart, hide...you can hide
Cause once it hit on yours
There is no undo to step
Once it found you
Hate me not
It warms you
A flame that burn
Burn the dark in your mind
Could be a lovely curse for life
To burn continuously
Flames never end
Fire of Love

Fire of love
No one can't run
When it hits it's warm
Hit from the ray from the sun
A bright kiss upon the ground
Like a blood flows in heart the green grows
Seed be weeds and trees cover all over the land
Another light spear shoot may reach the ice
Dissolve warm and burn the ice, and melt
Whenever it hit it's warm
No one, no one can run
As winter was touched to be spring
Warmer spring burned to be summer
A miracle may come in invisible flame
In this eternal flames
Fire of Love

Even for a thousands years
Flame it may flames
With Fire of love
Fire of love

Submitted: Sunday, April 07, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, October 09, 2013

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

When i writing this poem, what played around in my mind was sunshine that i imagined as golden needle, that warming ice from white to greener spring, so then imagery of love angels cupid came use the needle as their arrow that hit any cold to be warm..later my mind added something like the arrow that made of light molded in shape of heart, a love shaped arrow that can kill the dark in any heart who has the black spaces inside...and i wrote down the stuff and finally i got time to write it as whole poem a poem about spring but has a love character too..My simple message is love everybody around you. Whatever it is or who they are, truly we born to love all not to make foe.maybe it just a fantastical mind but i love to share it with all of you..Hope you understand and enjoy this_Unwritten Soul

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  • Rookie - 321 Points Captain Cur (5/1/2013 5:39:00 AM)

    O my soul hold them tight
    Be now you are my arrows of light
    Hit a touch that turn bright
    The love lantern arrows
    My arrows of love light
    These are wonderfully written lines
    and convey your meaning brilliantly. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,498 Points Anthony Di''anno (4/18/2013 8:05:00 AM)

    I understand Soul. This is a very passionate plea that shimmers and dances in the liquidity of loves own sheen.
    It is simply beautiful. As is your message :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,381 Points Diane Hine (4/11/2013 6:46:00 AM)

    Cupids arrows fashioned from rays of pure energy - an irresistable image! Great title. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,300 Points Valsa George (4/10/2013 3:08:00 AM)

    To be burned in the infectious flame of love is a thrilling feeling! Let the world be caught in the wild fire of all embracing love ! ! ! A very very inspirational write, Soul! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 100 Points Terry O'leary (4/9/2013 12:28:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem, Soul... cuting right to the heart of the blazing flame of the Fire... wonderful... Terry (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Nader Baheri (4/9/2013 8:27:00 AM)

    this love is not a Lantern then.it s a wide flame and may burn all the worl through itself.

    O songbird, learn the Love from a butterfly
    which burnt but not a singing

    great written.hope your love reaches all over the world.but be carful not burn the world hahaha
    ~nb (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Frank James Davis (4/8/2013 5:27:00 AM)

    Dramatic repetition of the phrase Fire of love helps to reinforce and, eventually, validate the poet's brilliantly cited applications.
    A clever, effective- even, lovely- artistic choice by one who rarely errs in such matters. (Report) Reply

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