Love Is Like Prophet Solomon's Ring Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

Love Is Like Prophet Solomon's Ring



Throughout my life I would like to sing
Give me a little bit love darling
When you love me I feel like a king
Love is such a wonderful feeling
When life turns dark love keeps us dreaming
For a beautiful sunny morning
Baby be in love keep on loving
Without love we have only one wing
Love is like a magic that can bring
Smile on our face the most wanted thing
Love is like a tree needs watering
It bears sweet fruit so keep on waiting
Love can give life a whole new meaning
When you have love you have everything
And when you lose love you have nothing
Love is like Prophet Solomon's ring

Friday, November 23, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A magic ring called the 'Seal of Solomon' was supposedly given to Solomon and gave him power over demons The Seal of Solomon, in some legends known as the Ring of Aandaleeb, was a highly sought after symbol of power. In several legends, different groups or individuals attempted to steal it or attain it in some manner.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vishal Sharma 23 November 2012

romantic scenes.. praiseworthy check mine too

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Hazel Durham 23 November 2012

This is so true, we need love so much in our lives, this poem has amazing lines, very inspired write! !

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 23 November 2012

Very beautiful construction of thought, to be loved to be like a king with the ring as in Solomon's. Very passionate way of dealing with the message of love and building it up to a final conclusion with the use of the title. Very good coherence.

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Linda May Fox 23 November 2012

Lovely poem which speaks truth. I like your imagery and your exact rhyming couplets all the way through. Loved reading it. I invite you to read some of my poems!

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Marina B 23 November 2012

I really like this. Your message is clear, your view is hard to argue (for it is the truth) , the imagery is beautiful, and the comparisons are lovely. Most important thing is that it all makes sense. Great job!

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Kelvin Owusu 23 November 2012

a nice warmth love is a strong thing what connects us all

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Sallam Yassin 23 November 2012

A fine fruit of love as the tree as her fruit the man is the fruit of his heart

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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