Abdul Wahab


>>Love is like a rubber band


After stretching it a bit
If any one of you, two
Release the end you hold
Will hit the other like a rubber band
As love’s two ends
Ended, one in yours
And the other in your partner’s hand.

Submitted: Sunday, November 03, 2013
Edited: Sunday, November 03, 2013

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Comments about this poem (>>Love is like a rubber band by Abdul Wahab )

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (11/4/2013 4:51:00 PM)

    ouch that kind of love can really sting. a rubber band is a great metaphor. well said Wahab (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 376 Points Marie Shine (11/4/2013 6:52:00 AM)

    Wow! Superb penning in this succinct, metaphoric gem, dear Abdul. I love the title and the analogy of how love impacts on both people involved, if their love for each other should end. Exquisite inking, which I, thank you for sharing, Abdul. Blessings for a very lovely day... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,243 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (11/4/2013 2:34:00 AM)

    great metaphor indeed. lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 415 Points Yasmeen Khan (11/3/2013 8:26:00 AM)

    Interesting and well-said love is like a rubber band. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,862 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (11/3/2013 1:46:00 AM)

    Profound well said love it 10 thank you (Report) Reply

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