Love Is Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Love Is



Nice feeling
With almost willing
Not as fake art
But with emotional start

Think not
And always fought
With the idea of being
Poor or king

Who would want?
Not to be strong
In conviction
When following right instruction

May be internal weakness
Yet that is told on the face
One should accept or reject
That is fine piece of an act

Not all people can do it
And still feel fine and fit
That is real treasure
For making it sure

Love is not sold in market
So everybody can let
It is heavenly gift
Think over stand and make no shift

Tuesday, September 2, 2014
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2014

interesting point of view Shirley Dykes11 hours ago i felt this poem had words missing, needs more thought and depth

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2014

interesting idea... Yadu YerTair11 hours ago Love is not sold in market

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2014

loved this Anthony11 hours ago beautiful

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2014

Love is always lovable Bhupathi Prabhakara Rao11 hours ago Love is a feel not a deal Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2014

love it Hamza Mian11 hours ago nice poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2014

Solid in the present... Tracy Bollinger3 hours ago as only true love can do! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2014

Heart felt Barbara Rodgers3 hours ago This is coming from the heart. A love poem at best! Keep on keeping on! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2014

I swing- - - With love I sing- - Subhashchandra Adhav10 hours ago A poem expressing power of love in a different style with crucial emotional touch leaving a marked impression! - - - - - Well chosen words with a good rhyming scheme make the poem effective- - - - Great work- - - - -Excellent read- - - - Well done! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2014

Very sweet Mrinmoy Choudhury11 hours ago Emotion of love expressed very nicely - I loved reading reading. Thank you for sharing.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2014

Good work Raquel Ruz11 hours ago The juxtaposition of finding strength to admit love. Comment +1 .

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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