Love Insightful Poem by Indira Renganathan

Love Insightful

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Providential wish
None could aside brush
He vishoned not her; just heard
Simply he his love declared
Said she yes though feared

Chasing caste phobia parental
Made them bear a child premarital
Essayed their love the visionless
Forbade them the parents heartless
Conjoined they in a temple caste regardless

A true love story of two visionless
In love while in their classes
Years two later they declared
No law or parents guarded
Merely threatened and tortured

Eloped, struggled and starved
Sold comb and soap, themselves upgraded
Turned more blessed
Begotten kids born vision powered
Impaired not love; paired per divine command

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rajagopal haran 24 September 2009

your poem makes me ponder over His Holiness Dalai Lama's words...I believe all suffering is caused by ignorance. People inflict pain on others in the selfish pursuit of their happiness or satisfaction. Yet true happiness comes from a sense of peace and contentment, which in turn must be achieved through the cultivation of altruism, of love and compassion, and elimination of ignorance, selfishness, and greed....great theme well written madam

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a lovely love of two visionless...very true their love had an insight

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