Unwritten Soul


Love In The Raindrops


Kingdom of the sky
Unlimited heart to bound
As heart of earth wait along the skyline
Though they never be touched in distance
But love filled within space
Shared by two worlds
Sharing a life

So do you and I
Wherever we going
Living in a clear space
Between their two hearts
Of the ground and sky
Endlessly together
With loves unseen

Called by the sky
Voices through the sunlight
Sending a foreign touch
And warm invades below
Surrendering earth
For love given to the sky
Two loves then collide in a space
Swirl together in windy breath
That lies between their hearts
The space between the worlds
Untouchable side of sky and earth
Clouds be the ethereal bridge
Link the warm from above
Shades calms below
In any moves
And loves poured
The pure essence of life
To rain life with the droplets
The loves in raindrops
Let it rains, let it fall
In droplets of loves
A kiss of soul bringing to life

Fears in your cry
It will dry, let it be now
Rain will hide your tears
Wash away pain with love
Down with the raindrops
And return your smile
Like prayers from desert
Will get reply for love above
Unseen love, oh don't you deny
It does exist, it does alive
Pure love in the raindrops
Wash away the fears
With loves we have
Green the land
Back to the ocean

Depth of the ocean
Somewhere I keep my soul
With your name as a treasure
Buried deep In a box of my heart
Always locked and guarded
By the few promises
Of my life,
evolving around you
Away from harm
As pains will drown
Pulled down by my soul
Remain the waves in calm
In a such depth of the ocean

Oceanic mystery
Secrecy of seven deep seas
Wonder how deep each of it is
The beginning still purely one
The earliest drops from the sky
Fallen and reserves loves below
As loves in the raindrops
A miracle between two hearts
Unlimited unite in endless skyline
Shared love in the raindrops
Where the liquid crystal touched
By the love within it bringing life
Color land green and oceans blue
Living tall in the highest trees,
Even In depth of the oceans
Love covers it all
From the rain, by two hearts
Though their hands never hold
Because miracle come from souls

Whenever you feel lost
Wherever you walking to
With loves in the rain
Life will survives
In each raindrop
A love fallen on you
And thousands soak
Immersed the soul into
So life to be called and return
Wherever loves in raindrops fallen
Everywhere we go, always between two hearts
Within their loves that we may stand
Just then, open your heart
When it rain,
When it rain,
For loves fall into
You

Submitted: Saturday, April 27, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, September 24, 2013

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~Love In The Raindrops~
1st stanza: A Panorama of two loves, sky and earth..will they ever meet?
2nd: The space between them is the chamber, our atmosphere for them keep their loves and we consume that air right now!
3rd: The clouds are here when the combination of loves that purely made and bring life within each drops...as it green lands and provide underwater world of many life.
4th: Love can kill fears, as rain hides tears... God so creative!
5th: Love from the rain will be pooled in the deepest valley and be seas where it becomes a treasure that deeper than we thought, deeper in heart in human, core in tree...
6th: Each drop represent a love, but rain fall millions drops pure love..so do us people, we are a drop of water in a big population, if we carry loves, world will be more than anything..if we ever have this pure love
7th: We always live in love, even when we lost dont forget to believe, as God loves to believe and we never seen them like a physically form but they appeared in other shapes, blessing! ! so open our hearts for Him and others to love unconditionally


It's all about a trust we have to each other, I wrote in the time of rainy day, and remind me something about the rain. Rain, a blessing
gift but rarely felt in our busy time..and blessing is a sign of love. Somehow it reminds me about a question of the ultimate love, We never see God but if we feel deeply, you will see...the love always poured and this about two hearts, who may never get touch not even meet, but it always possible to create miracle if our souls willing to trust and give... like the rain it vapors dirty to clean water and shared life its bring to the whole world, your cry is a remembrance of a love that sky and earth do, and you...and who creates you and i wrote this for someone who wanted to believe if you want to believe, that there is love in each raindrops..A miracle does exist, if soul is pure. Give our heart who wants to believe though i am unseen because like a story earth and sky, we still can be people that live withing the framed space, of love and bring it to life
(maybe still need some editing) _ Unwritten Soul

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  • Veteran Poet - 3,081 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/8/2013 11:53:00 AM)

    Wow. Wonderful poem Soul..Love is in each rain drop..Rain will hide your tears....Loved reading each lines..
    Fantastic write like always.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,396 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (6/21/2013 2:14:00 PM)

    After all A soul that to be unwritten thanks for this kind of lovely write with note though painful but you helped a lot (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,860 Points Neela Nath (5/25/2013 11:47:00 AM)

    Wash away tear with rain water.There's love in each raindrop.So beautiful diction! Soul, really it's stainless and pure as dawn.Amazing! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (5/13/2013 2:57:00 AM)

    A very Soulful write indicating that There is love in each raindrop is heartening indeed! A miracle does exist, if soul is pure is a great thought which is highly captivating! The notes you've provided are an extentuation of your beautiful poem! Incredible write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 229 Points Poetheart Morgan (5/4/2013 12:07:00 PM)

    Hello Soul, i have not much to say because all poets did what i want to say! But you really have a Global and universal Soul! Peace friend. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,232 Points Patricia Grantham (5/4/2013 6:57:00 AM)

    An unusually beautiful poem. The wording and poetry is really magnificent in
    context and creativity. I always loved the rain, it replenishes the earth and waters
    our soul. A very captivating read. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 11 Points Jahan Zeb (5/3/2013 8:28:00 AM)

    very imaginative and suggestive. I liked the mature idea behind this piece. you have become a soul now. Nicely donne. Sorry for being late. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 717 Points Thomas A Robinson (4/30/2013 7:09:00 AM)

    The ocean is the heart of the earth created by the gifts from the sky in the form of ariving comets made of ice crystals. The anger of the earth is cooled by these water when red molten lava spills out of the earth's crust
    onto the surface or into the seas by the sky's rain or collected raindrops of the sea. The sky's love transforms
    the hard lifeless crust into a landscape of life by washing away the harshness in tears of rain becoming a fertile
    earth. The clouds shade the earth's brow and bring relief to the deserts and power to the rivers. Without the love of the sky the earth would be a barren lifeless cold and relentless land. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,536 Points Lyn Paul (4/30/2013 5:37:00 AM)

    Truly loved the last verse. You are such a caring Soul and will touch many hearts through your long life. Thank You. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,396 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (4/29/2013 10:41:00 PM)

    Raindrop, meta4 life, life in you in your concluding line though unwritten suffixed with soul, when one switch on the fan or appliances electricity(soul) it runs the machine body is the same...it is not off but on....the soul love u thank, nice (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,396 Points Paul Brookes (4/29/2013 11:53:00 AM)

    The rain has many blessings 'that bridges the heaven and earth' love is a blessing that rains on us if we're lucky. I hope is rains its blessings full hearted on you Beautiful write thanks for sharing. BB : O)) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,559 Points Diane Hine (4/29/2013 4:56:00 AM)

    Vapour, clouds and rain as a bridge between Earth and sky is a fabulous image. This poem is as refreshing as a shower on a hot day. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,559 Points Nader Baheri (4/28/2013 10:33:00 AM)

    unfourtunately i am not the first one who has read this wonderful poem although i tried.
    rain makes every thing better.its simple at the first place.a liquid water that is vaporized.and then when its cold and heavy enough it falls down under the gravity.thats like the love does.its a pure feeling vaporized from each heart then when the love accumulates gradually then it pours on each soul who greets it to be pured on.
    but this love is like a rainbow it needs both sun and rain so that all its colors be exposured.the rain makes the souls pure and the sun warms it and then an ever lasting love between two hearts gleams.
    i just imagine that big sun warms up two detatched souls.one of them may be dirty soul but one of them is pure.so what is vaporized is real love.then the love pours down again on those souls and make them both happy.who ever says that sun brings happiness has never danced in the rain.the souls dancing happily in the rain.
    so i agree completely with the ending of this poem and that is the best thing i can do whenever it rains is let it rain and open my heart to embrace an unseen love and hold it tight inside me.
    any way the forth part is really marvelous.
    i am the one who praise this poem and thanks alot.i voted 10+++++
    ~nb (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 138 Points Spiritual Seeker (4/28/2013 12:51:00 AM)

    I love rain..as a kid, we love to play in the rain...but sadly, as adults we avoided it. I like your line...rain will hide your tears! Beautiful write...thanks (Report) Reply

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