Love In Bloom Poem by Fay Slimm

Love In Bloom

Rating: 5.0


Wintering 'neath covers of chilly heart,
Lonely for warmth, but waiting, set apart
Yet somehow anticipating, roots fed
Unnoticed, but sustained, become bedded
And ready for love. Unexpectedly
Come rains, falling gently above, rejected
At first, but soaking with words, find their way.
Quenching, they drench my soul, while swaying
Away fears, - then tiny movements in roots
Become shoots, which in turn soon beautify
My flowering with heady, fragranced display
Of love in bloom that now blesses my day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 15 January 2009

Fay, Very beautiful... 10... Tsira

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Fiona Davidson 15 January 2009

This really describes that first flush of love...winter thaws and becomes spring...beautiful Fay...thank you...Fi

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Ency Bearis 15 January 2009

Awesome poem..lovely...10

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Sandra Fowler 15 January 2009

May love bloom forever. Against such brave and fragile words, winter has no power. Love, SandraX

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 15 January 2009

May love bloom always, beautiful write... Andy 10

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Bob Gibson 22 January 2009

Falling in love! that beautiful feeling when we give everything to the one we love!

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Tia Maria 16 January 2009

There is a depth to this that struck me personally... a slow, almost painful transition into complete, beautiful... LOVE. Wow Fay, you truly are a blessed poet. Thank you xx 10 10 10

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Andriana Londono 15 January 2009

Wat a well written poem..i luv it..Xd

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Kris Smith 15 January 2009

Such a warm and tender write Fay may your heart always be spring 10++++ Chris

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Lynda Robson 15 January 2009

Love is certainly in bloom with this charming piece you have written, Thank you Fay, 10 Lynda xx

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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