Love, I Want Poem by shakil ahmed

Love, I Want

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The girl who has lost in wilderness
I do not have her company.
The girl who is a nightingale
I do not have her symphony.
The girl who is a dazzling beauty
I do not have her pity.
The girl who has oozing grace and youth
I have not enjoyed both.
The girl who has dark and deep eyes
I do not have its amorous sighs.
The girl who always wears a lovely smile,
The girl who follows a different style,
I am anxious to get her favour,
I want to be her one and only lover.
The girl who is callous and ruthless,
She offers and I get severe pain.
The girl who is wanton and betrayer,
She offers love and I cannot share.
Love does not come the way I want,
Rather it comes and gives heart-burnt.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh T A 16 November 2009

A different kind of love is interesting to read!

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Beena J 17 November 2009

love is a dangerous game indeed well written

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Kewayne Wadley 04 December 2015

Beautifully articulated! Deep longing pictured well. KW

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Gajanan Mishra 18 November 2015

Nothing but love, I want, that suffice the purpose of life..

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nice poem...10 Just share where you seem and feel fair the human beings are same everywhere so keep no fear

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Sahra Hussein 20 October 2014

You can close your eyes what you don't want to see but you can't close your heart what you don't want to feel. love is lucky

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Seema Chowdhury 17 November 2009

don't get disappointed. life will certainly give you a chance to fall in love with your dream girl. good luck.

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shakil ahmed

shakil ahmed

Badarpur, Assam, India.
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