! ! ! ! ! ! Love I'Like! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dwi utami

! ! ! ! ! ! Love I'Like! ! ! ! ! !

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Althought the love flowed in air.
Althought the love joined with the cloud.
Afterwards the love will descend to rain.
Wetted the land in our heart and began to blossom the love flowers in the heart.

Althought the heart that speake.
Althought sky heard.
A contents of the world knew.
Who that i'love.

The calm lake with water blue.
Crossed the shadow was full of the attraction.
The face of fresh dew was still being warm on the hands.

You had all the attractions in my heart.
Held tight my hand and gazed at my eyes.
You will see the rainbow from inside my heart.

His colour represented all the feeling of my love to you.
Depict our love on the cloud.
So that nature then knew how i'loved you.

My love to you like the coral stone will not be unstable in lunged at the storm.
Your face was more beautiful.
I'want to proofred your heart and was first and last occupants in my heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Claudia Krizay 27 April 2011

Dwi, you write beautifully. This is one of my favorite poems I have read on this site- sensitive with good choice of words- keep it up!

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Kevin Carney 21 August 2010

Nice write, so tender. good thought and flow. I like this poem: }

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