Love Does Hurt Poem by Emily Torres
Love Does Hurt
you hold your breath
but not for long
for tonight is the night
you will soon be gone
you say your dues
you wish me well
too bad i was the one who fell
i fell in love
but you dont care
you took my all
and left me bare
you watched me cry
you heard my dreams
but what i dont understand
is why you would leave
alone i am now
because you choose her
forever in doubt
because love does hurt...
Your peice of writing is, 'jumpy' and all over the place. Imagine a river. that is what your poem should be like. You have a good story, but with some tunning, it'll be great.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 8:10:10 AM # 1.0.0.1119
I like this.Its short but the short ones are always the best.