Love Comes With A Price Poem by Pezz McEwin

Love Comes With A Price

Rating: 5.0


Water of Death
You may not come in
Love is like the ocean
The windows broke
Next it tried the door
Death in purity and sacredness
Nameless here forever more
Because you were in Love
In return you hurt me a lot
Go ahead I dare you to just try and take it away from me
My heart is protected
It'll be just another battle scar
I have been scarred by barbs of pain
To keep alive, my lifelong plan
I stand amid the roar

Of a surf-tormented shore
Battered by weary spirit and will
But now I stand on my two legs
But there I saw her
Her complexion saddened me
A tear rolled down my cheek
Her hand slowly slipped… away

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem was dedicated to my friend. She had died and I decided to write down my pain.

It is a found poem: Meaning I took some lines from a bunch of different poems and mixed it together and added some words to make it more clear. The whole bibliography follows:

Line 1: http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/4-elements-water/
Line 2 & 5: http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/wraith/
Line 4: Element Added.
Line 3: http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/elements-of-love-4/ Modified
Line 6: http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/death-death-and-death/
Line 7: http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/the-raven-14/
Line 8 & 9: http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/waiting-waiting-always-waiting/ Modified
Line 10: http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/angry-poem-angered/
Line 11: http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/a-heart-protected/ Modified
Line 12: http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/love-leaves-battlescars/
Line 13 & 14: http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/love-is-a-battlefiled/ Modified
Line 15 & 16: http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/a-dream-within-a-dream/
Line 17 & 18: http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/was-battered-and-bruised/ Modified
Line 19,21, & 22: http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/heartbroken-56/
Line 20: Element Added
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