Love Cinematic Poem by Indira Renganathan

Love Cinematic

Rating: 5.0


Such is their love..
Decked up hero decent
On heroine descent
Her wavy locks to hide
Beatifying music on
Whilst a group of angels
On pulsating beats
Twist and break and embellish all..

Their love is played caste-free
Sing and smile and cry
Then to elope
Cheating villains beaten
Beating parents treated
Treated love greeted
My heart beats rapidly
Uttering 'all untrue, untrue'..

Their production of love
In silence multi-sold
Mindless hero next bothered
Still.. the heroine responds to realise
Delayed with bulging woes
Hung out from a noose
Downward from an upstroke
To confess to her own heart

Monday, November 10, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shimon Weinroth 14 November 2008

well versed and too true, alas how we have been influenced by Hollywood productions,10

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C T Heart 10 November 2008

beautiful imagery used...fine poetic free verse...a 10 from me Indira.

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Ency Bearis 10 November 2008

great vivid imagery write..nice concept..A10 Ency Bearis

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Joseph Poewhit 10 November 2008

People get lost in image love

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Indira Babbellapati 10 November 2008

a so called scintillating world of lights and shades...

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