Love Between Two Persons Poem by Alex Perez

Love Between Two Persons



Love is the strongest feeling a person can feel and share
With it, the impossible is done
And all of life seems fair
Having the sensation and idea that something new has begun

It doesn't matter who you share the feeling with ever
As long as you know it's true and faithful
Be with them and hold your hands in public together
Don't let anyone mess with your mind by being hateful
They have never felt what love is

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cynthia Buhain-baello 26 June 2009

Hi Alex, I read your poem and it's a good one, except grammatically, we say love 'between' two persons, or love towards 'anyone'. If it's a group, we say love 'among' people. Perhaps a revision of your title will make it more appropriate. Cynthia

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