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Love and Smoking (Alternative Version)

In both the cases
The end result turned into ashes
One is lighted with fire
The other with desire

First one reduces
After being puffed up
The second one stretches
After being pulled up

Both burns with flames
One with smoke and light
After consuming oxygen
The other with hunger and thirst
After being fed on emotions

Submitted: Thursday, November 07, 2013
Edited: Saturday, November 09, 2013


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  • Heather Wilkins (11/10/2013 1:10:00 PM)

    a great comparison of desires. good imagery. enjoyed the read

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