Abdul Wahab

>≫≫Love - -An Addiction Unlike Cigarettes - Poem by Abdul Wahab

In both the addiction cases
The end results are being turned into ashes
After being burnt from the time
A cigarette lighted with fire
And love with desire
So smoking is injurious
But love is not
As it burns till death
In pleasure, in delight
Whereas smoking ends up at butt
After being puffed up with smoke and light.

Comments about >≫≫Love - -An Addiction Unlike Cigarettes by Abdul Wahab

  • Veteran Poet - 1,134 Points Queeny Gona (11/11/2013 7:19:00 AM)

    Wonderful comparison, loved the read! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 39,822 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (11/7/2013 9:37:00 PM)

    comparison brought by the poet is great thank (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (11/6/2013 6:41:00 PM)

    a good comparison between the cigarette and love. sometimes it is hard to put the flame of love out. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,843 Points David Wood (11/4/2013 8:19:00 AM)

    Love is a many splendid thing, a light to the world. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 481 Points Danny Draper (11/4/2013 4:00:00 AM)

    An interesting comparison the ephemeral and harmful with the eternal and exhilarating but also potential harmful. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,267 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (11/4/2013 2:32:00 AM)

    oh, what a comparison, and so well put! love does burn but it's different. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,134 Points Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (11/3/2013 9:51:00 PM)

    the last but of the cigaret is the kiss of the woman.
    well put (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,053 Points Kanniappan Kanniappan (11/3/2013 10:56:00 AM)

    Dear Abdul Wahab,
    Excellent poem comparing love and cigarette.

    'A cigarette lighted with fire
    And love with desire' Nice! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 3, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, November 4, 2013

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