Love Always Wins Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Love Always Wins

Rating: 5.0


Early morning came,
With dark brown clouds,
With a singing dawn,
With the dancing winds,
The veiled sun,
Hidden somewhere,
But his smile,
Was so pleasant,
Awoke the souls,
From very deep,
The dreaming sleep,
The sick flower,
With a mild shower,
Was turned in flames,
The amazing flames,
Very cold outside,
Very hot inside,
All her senses,
Were active now,
Sensed her colors,
Felt her fragrance,
Heard the music,
Tasted rain drops,
Twisted her petals,
Now shocking pink,
Withstood the rains,
Now heavy and violent,
She was not afraid,
Of frightening thunders,
And flash of lightening,
Nature has blown,
A new soul in her,
She smiled like a bud.
Her beauty and grace,
Her challenging face,
Constrained the nature,
For a friendly surrender!

But the nature smiled,
And said to her,
My dear rose bud,
A starry night,
With the shining moon light,
Humid and hot,
Sweating and tiring,
But romantic as well,
Provocations from my side,
Is ahead of you,
I would love to see,
How you sustain,
The youth of new soul,
I shall eagerly watch,
If your petals remain,
Fresh and pink,
Happily I shall go,
If I surrender once again!

Love always wins,
And nature proudly said,
They are my slaves,
They shall remain my slaves.

Wednesday, September 10, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Love is soul of nature, who can defeat the nature!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Musfiq Us Shaleheen 10 September 2014

Love always wins, And nature proudly said, They are my slaves, They shall remain my slaves. ............... Beautiful sir

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Khalida Bano Ali 10 September 2014

A sweet, beautiful and enchanting poem.

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Salini Nair 10 September 2014

Love always wins, ....................beautiful poem

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 September 2014

A Wonderful poem with beautiful lines...... Love always wins, And nature proudly said, They are my slaves, They shall remain my slaves. Very true said, love always wins...Loved reading each lines..

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Heather Wilkins 10 September 2014

love always win a lovely poem well written

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 June 2018

A vivid portrayal of the beauty of nature. Compelling imagery. A great poem brilliantly crafted.10

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Khalid Saifullah 11 May 2018

Love always wins is a great poem.

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Sarmad Mirza 16 September 2014

A very Beautiful poem really true

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Yasmin Khan 13 September 2014

A beautiful poem, indeed

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Valsa George 13 September 2014

The description of early dawn in the first half of the poem is just wonderful! Enjoyed!

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