(love) A Kiss Poem by K. Jared Hosein

(love) A Kiss

Rating: 5.0


A kiss down by the riverside,
When the waterspouts
Comes to life
And across the evergreen glide.
A kiss with your mouth open wide,
With noses nuzzling
And lying on a foliage mattress
With nothing to hide.

A kiss beneath the harvest moon,
In the wheat and the rye,
When pixies spiral to an eventide rune
'Til the morning Phoenix soars by.
A kiss during a fiery noon
In the fields of midday bloom
And so sings the loon
While petals rise from the gloom.

A kiss, for birds to sing,
For the winter to turn to spring
An exchange of bliss,
A kiss,
To melt a world of snow
In one breath of warm mist.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Tyler 11 March 2006

I enjoy your romantic poems particularly. This is stunning.

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Nimal Dunuhinga 14 March 2006

Oh! what a marvelous eternal kiss you are describing.Splendid K.................

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Chaminda Pushpadewa 12 November 2018

dear poet the poem word order is very nice thank

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Pat Weddle 20 March 2006

Brilliant use of feelings using both the tactile and the visual. Also rhythmically hypnotic word repetition.

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Dan Tharp 19 March 2006

Nicely done, Jared... dan

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Michael Gale 18 March 2006

Nicely done so right, rightly done by light. You write well, and you are right. To each their own, it's how you put your spin on looks of others. Best regards-Mike Gale.

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Rufina Moor 18 March 2006

Really liked this poem. :) Awesome choice of words.

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K. Jared Hosein

K. Jared Hosein

Trinidad and Tobago, West Indies.
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