Love? Poem by Tareq Jalabi

Love?

Rating: 3.9


Love hardly stays
especially these days
Love is so cold
Although it has flames
Have you heard the stories
That were told
always be a chicken
And never be bold
Don`t be a toy
Played in its games
Keep taking the bus
Instead of its five-star planes
Control your heart
Keep your emotions cooled
Don`t fall in love
Don`t be fooled

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bleeding Bride 15 June 2008

i've fallen in love just for him to rip m heart out and never cared.

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thats how it should be told and thats how people are, for some reason they never care who they hurt

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Bianca B. 20 June 2008

thats exactly how it should be told. Love is seriously dangerous everyone gets hurt because of it

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Sw33t Girl 25 June 2008

I don't have that situation with me at all, but as growing up I have been hurt because of love. Sometimes we all think why love has to be so hard.

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LOVE is for all....tts is want all of us want.to be love with the person whom care for us and love us with open heart.....Falling in love is not fool...its only falling in love with the person you think is really the one for you......

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Rana Zalloum 07 September 2010

so true that it hurts

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Ro'ya Abdulaal 15 September 2009

'Don`t fall in love Don`t be fooled ' what a great ending, well written and well expressed. So true. What do you think, fall in love with a chance that you might get hurt or not fall in love at all. I say the first option, don't hold back

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Bushra Hussaini 11 September 2009

lil funny yet very much true...good job! !

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 30 December 2008

I do not fully agree as I has a good example of myself and my love which our love will last forever till death I vowed though we are separated because of his studies for the time being but I will always regard him as my one and only love.

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asma Jone 02 December 2008

love this poem like when it says, Love hardly stays especially these days, so true

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