Love Poem by Sathya Narayana
Love
We crave it, when young, in rage
Scared of it, when wise, to divulge
Love! The undeterring vice of any age
Underlines our life at every stage
What an onus laden on man
Since the “Adam”antine sin
Is it a curse or a boon?
He delivered to the whole clan
At dawn fills your bosom to the brims of thrills
But anon! Drills your heart to a well of tears
Culprit the love! The Cupid’s scourge
Always difficult to interpret it’s maze
i can die for my children for my wife for my lover for my country for my religion that's Love
I didn't like the rhyme scheme on this one. Otherwise, I thought it was very good. I wish I could have given a better number. GW62
‘What an onus laden on man…’ Commenting on just this line: Not onus but Love a soul’s bonus bounty. Good write ten dr.sakti Thanks for comment. Cordially invite to my page. ds
Looks like we do share the same opinion on love. I'm gonna read some of your other poems tomorrow. They look pretty interesting.
wow! ! ! ! ! ! very true sathya----Only love let's us see normal things In an extraordinary way. thanks for sharing ++++++++++10 regards anjali
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 11:25:25 AM # 1.0.0.1119
hii sathya, your poem 'LOVE' is really a lovable poem.