Love Poem by Titto Mutunguti

Love

Rating: 5.0


When I was about to give up,
You made me give in.
When i was about to hate,
you made me forgive and forget.
When I was about to regret,
you made me appreciate.
When I was about to cheat,
You made me sincere,
When I was about to retreat,
you made me persevere.
When i was about to mistreat,
You made adhere,
To your simple rules,
That's you LOVE

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Clarence Prince 25 September 2012

It's nice and neat, Titto, a good start! Blessings!

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Lyn Paul 27 September 2012

A beautiful poem Titto. Keep up the great work. thank you for sharing

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Chinedu Dike 10 February 2018

The essence and intricacies of love are aptly captured in the poem. Well conceived and brilliantly penned with insight. Thanks for sharing Titto and do remain enriched.

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Val Legend 12 October 2016

things love can do... nice one

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 December 2015

To your simple rules, That's you LOVE. wonderful description. you have become here a divine poet h ere. you have a special art to make use of contrasts in writing poetry. love it. tony

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Titto Mutunguti 19 December 2015

Thanks alot...I appreciate...Your comment means alot to me...

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Charity Nduhiu 13 October 2015

True love is always very sincere. I concur with the above.

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Titto Mutunguti 19 December 2015

Thanks alot Nduhiu..I am humbled

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Ambrosia A 09 May 2013

I just love reading it again and again....... True love is like that, it wil chase u.

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