Love Poem by Trinity Augustin

I saw your request to comment on your poetry. I might not be much help but I will give it a try and good luck! This poem is very usual, and striaght to the point. In todays world you need your own style to show everyone that you can prove something. Try something unique and funky, it might help your writing to expand. other then that this is great. Love is a fabulous topic to write about or sing about because everyone in the world can relate. It's a worldwide language that everyone is trying to understand. Keep up the great work.