Love Poem by kharon march

Love

Rating: 4.7


love is a concept that i have not yet conceived by a boy such as me.But I try i really do you should see by the gleam an my eyes and the smile an my cheeks. When you love some one its hard to pass the time when they are the only thing on your mind.This feeling wont cease its like hands at my throat that wont release.Is this love i'm not sure but i do know that i will love her for ever MORE

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alisha A. 25 August 2013

This is beautiful! Great job! ^_^

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Julianna Mcleod 04 June 2013

I agree with Romeo, whose name I love dearly as my own.! I loved the way that was written and it's so relate-able For I feel that too. :) When I see him smile at me in the hall, yet he won't speak to me, I tried to tell him how I feel but I'm not sure he caught my drift when I said I couldn't smile back because I could hardly breath.

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Romeo Della Valle 27 October 2011

Outburst of the heart! A beautiful and well penned confession of love! This touching write shows your great and honest feelings but also your potential in the Poetry World.10+++ Keep it up! You have a long way to go through the path that will one day lead you straight to reach your goal! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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