Love is fleeing
Requires daily work to grasp its fashion
Like black and white rainbows
Impassioned rejection
Uncontrolable intimate addiction
Could saftely individualize
Walls built
Bricks of egotism
Neat impassive layered rows
Mortar made with efficent channeled efficaious pain
Impersonation of a contending composure
Courious,
Aluring Infatuation
Unoticed
Endorsing accumulative decietful foundation cracks.
overall I enjoyed the message of this piece. though it did feel a little disconnected, and I had a hard time getting really personal with the poem..I did enjoy it though.. Always, Amberlee
Great poem. Gave ya a ten. The words built and fleeting are mispelled. Other than that this poem is excellent. God bless all poets-MJG.
Very nice poem i like how you captured this the most beautiful topic of poetry here especially like this 'uncontrolable intimate addiction' best wishes and lot of addiction like this Anna
I'm about to run out the door, but I wanted to take the time to tell you how much I enjoyed this poem. And I'll for sure be reading more of your work. Peace, L&T
Dear Howard, its kind of you to write of you on my poem [put a smile upon your face]. well how did you read it? this topic's not quite common! Your poem's better than mine! Beat Regards.... Leah
Love how its flowing the rhyms specially the end requires daily work to grasp its fashipn like black and white rainbows.
This poem has a beautiful rythm and well chosen language. A lovely poem to soak in
see now this is a great poem! i 'Really really liked this poem' It felt like the world stopped just a moment to read this poem lol. Love it Samantha Lynn
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Howard, Although your poem reflects signs of hurt its message is very clear to me. Is love really only a dream? I fear that many of us don't understand that it doesn't matter. Love to dream, dream to love. By doing this you will have the best of each and both will expand and blossom. Perry