Love? Poem by Grace DeVon miller

Love?

Rating: 5.0


love i fell is a lie
only breaks you down
tears you apart
eats you alive
slowly killing you
it is also pain
kills and you would never guess

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Urshula Davis 05 July 2011

love it but u kept me puzzled at the end!

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 05 July 2011

It was really a great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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