Love Poem by Noel Guzman

Love

Rating: 5.0


Love
One our greatest emotions
Love
My one true weakness
Love
It tears me to pieces
Love
From one I’m forbidden to have
Love
Just a torture device
Love
For one who doesn’t care anymore
Love
Is what has shattered me to pieces
Love
Will be the death of me
Love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 21 August 2011

I agree with Chris from FB, it has a very nice flow! Concerning Love, only time will let you know if it was really love or an obsession! A very well penned write where you freely speak your mind and heart! 10+++ Keep it up and thank you for sharing! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from NYC....

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 14 July 2011

you are actually right at your lines about love-but i want to include the joy and smiles and bliss love brings. of course we all feel hurt at one time in our life, but love will always be a wonderful thing. nice poem here. ten points.

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Stan Petrovich 13 July 2011

Lofty are your words, and impoverished are your follow-ups. I hope you keep it going.

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