Love Poem by Ravi Panamanna

Love

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Parents to their children
Children to their parents,
The wind is the same
But the feel is different.

Brother to his sister
Sister to her brother
The heart is the same
But the beats are different.

Wife to her husband
Husband to his wife
The bower is the same
But the beauty is different.

Lover to his lover
Lover to her lover
The dale is the same
But the calls are different.

Man to his possessions
Man to his mansions
The song is the same
But the chords are different.

Man to his tastes
Man to his themes
The window is the same
But the peeps are different.

Love is one of condition,
Love is one of possession.
Love of this kind is a web
And leaves mankind in eternal sobs

A twinkling star
A baby’s captive smile
The verses are the same
The readings are the same.

The presence of God
The presence of great men
The core is the same
The fountains are perennial

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Obinna Eruchie 26 October 2009

It is true, 'The heart is the same / But the beats are different.'

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Anna Dorfman 26 October 2009

very true, very simple. this poem can be got a person from 10 to 90 :)

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Alf Hutchison 26 October 2009

Ravi.. you have captured the very essence of love in a very unique way... well penned my friend Alf

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Catrina Heart 26 October 2009

Love in different stages and sense...........great written poem...well done!

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bye bye... bye bye 26 October 2009

The concept of Love = God. But we are only humans so the love we are capable to is always restricted - different. A good one!

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Surya . 27 October 2009

this is indeed a wonderful poem.well captured.congrats. voted10 surya

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Nimal Dunuhinga 27 October 2009

It's much more than love! Thanks Ravi.

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Indira Babbellapati 27 October 2009

very well expressed...

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 27 October 2009

it is a very beautiful poem

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Sonya Florentino 27 October 2009

the greatest kind of love is unconditional love which it seems only God is naturally capable of.... we can only try our best to emulate.....

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Ottapalam- Kerala State- India
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