~love~ Poem by sabrina burkett

~love~

Rating: 4.0


what is love about...
is it somethin worth putting urself down?

sometimes i ask y people r on this world to love?
everything sometimes deals with love..

i think love is a very pationate word...
love don't just deal wit one person it is usually more then one...

i ask god if there is someone out there that has no one to love and he answers yes there is...

sometimes i worry about love...
is there any love in this world no there may be a glimps of love but this world is filled with drama and characters...

my i ask what is love? ...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Love is hope Love is peace Love is faith Love is faith- fulness, love is beautiful. Love is God.

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sara }i{ 17 September 2009

now i really dont know....all i know that love is pain But i like your poem......great job ;)

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Broken Soul 21 May 2010

i really like your poem. i can honestly say that i have been in love before. love hurts if you ask me. love is when you cant stand to be away from someone. when all you want to do is just talk to that person. all you want to do is have that person in your arms. i loved someone very much. but he kept braking my heart. over and over. i finally just accepted that he didnt love me the way i loved him. it turns out that he is gay but me and him are best friends and im not in love with him anymore. i do love him tho. but only as a best friend. i think that everybody needs to find that first love. and then everybody needs to get their heartbroken at least once so that they can learn from it. and love the next person even more then their first love. *~Krista~*

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Rajinder Singh 28 January 2010

love is the greatest feeling

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Christine Schmidt 22 October 2009

glad u put ur real name up :) ...instead of 'confused about this'. anyway onto ur poem...i like ur way of thinking...and using the? in a poem...i wasn't sure if mispelling was part of your poem or just accidental (if so, nothing spellcheck can't fix-and trust me, i mispell too) ...i liked how you varried the line lengths, when talking about love, longer line lengths keeps it soft and smooth...very nice! ~Christine

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Sans Serif 06 October 2009

Love is the high you get when you're around that special someone. Love is the want of hearing their voice. Love is the need to see their face. Love is being apart but still close. Love is the feeling somewhere in between. Love is knowing you will never let go. Love is all you have to give. Love is what you make it to be.

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i think love is pain love is happyness love is every thing love is all around you its al the drama its all the people love is around you 24/7

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