Love Poem by justin walker

Love

Rating: 4.8


we all think love is something we feel, but that
is not wat i think. i believe its just something
you say to cover up another hurt or feeling that
is hurting you. yes i have said it and i kno you
have to. wat is your reason? did you get hurt
by your mom, dad, brother, or sister? or is
it a friend that lied to you or stabbed you
in the back. wat evr the reason. you want
to say it but trust me dont. it burns a lot of
hearts and steals a lot of time from your
so called loved one one or you. when u
get hurt dont cover it up. let it out tell them
how you feel. if not i suggest writing it on
a piece of paper or email it to some one
who just might care. these people who try
to actually help and not tell you to let it go
are the people who actually care for u.
you are probably guessin how do i
kno, well im one of those people
who are afraid to let everyone
see their flaws or why they
hurt so much. i dont kno
how i have become to
be the person who
i am talkin about.
but thats who i
am and thats
everything i
kno about
LOVE.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R T 22 October 2008

Justin this is a lovely free poem, its felt.I think you wrote it from your heart and i absloutly agree you but sometimes when people talk their pain others don't appriciate it and think it is weakness, so the damages be more. Still i recommend people with your advice but if they know that the others will really read it. Thanks

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Amanda Seltrecht 07 January 2009

This is so very true I think that we often tell others that we love them out of spite. We may not be in love with them but we love them as a person. People are often left wondering if they will ever fall in love with someone. I have often wondered it myself, but I figure that if it is meant to happen it will. I believe that love is the only thing to really live for and if you haven't felt love from someone then you proubably haven't felt the need to express how you feel. I also believe that love is out there for everyone and you will find it.

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Mimi Fakhira 29 December 2008

Living love with a human can be painful but with God it's like paradise on earth. You'll find what you're seeking for one day. God is just to His servants.. that's why your name is Justin! Anyway, great poem, my friend.

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Arin Tumanuvao 19 November 2008

I can see that we share the same views on love....I just hope you find a true kind of love...And don't worry, it's out there.

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**paris* forever forgotten** 19 November 2008

I love your poems. i've s en a couple of young men expressing themselves through lovely & mature poems.that makes me proud.keep it up and God Bless Yall! you too Justin.

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Anjali Sinha 18 November 2008

Justin You are so sweet, theres so much pathos here, I also notice that you are so young but very mature I can see a great potential for you for growth. I pray that God Bless You always very nice write A++ and 10++ love anju

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