Love Poem by Sarah Cook

Love

Rating: 4.8


Love Everyone talks about how great
it is but yet when they get there
Heart Broken there no longer
in love, When you really in love you'd
do anything for that person, You'd take
a bullet for them and you wanna
have there kids together, When you love someone
you act different, Your heart beasts slow
when your not with them and then
it beats faster when your
with them, You wanna
marry the person,
grow old together

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 27 November 2008

a 10+ for ya lovely write! .......10+

0 0 Reply
Blue Eyes 13 November 2008

i actually liked the poem.it is heart felt one it touched my heart deeply.

0 0 Reply
Asif Andalib 10 October 2008

I like your definition of love. But I wonder whether you mean, 'Your heart beats slow' by saying 'Your heart beasts slow'. I think it's a typographical error. Keep on writing in order to create masterpieces. Another 9.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success