George Murdock

Lotus Flower - Poem by George Murdock

I dream of you open like the pale Lotus flower
The petals of your nether lips moist with
dew drops of honey nectar
your inner flesh luscious and splayed
pink to red like a strawberry
I stare at your belly rising and falling
My eyes moving upward to the swell
Of soft round white mountains capped with dark currants
The odor of your honey melon
rising from the wings of your hips
reaches my flared nostrils
it is the sea and mist
a grotto of joyous communion
a soft lovely nest of lust
waiting for the lash of my tongue

Comments about Lotus Flower by George Murdock

  • Silver Star - 3,645 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (10/13/2015 11:43:00 PM)

    Beautiful description indeed! (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Gold Star - 5,573 Points Bill Galvin (10/13/2015 8:34:00 PM)

    Sensuous, indeed... 'nuff said... and said well. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,153 Points Anil Kumar Panda (10/13/2015 3:43:00 AM)

    Beautiful poetry. Full of love and passion it flows so nice. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 46,883 Points Edward Kofi Louis (10/13/2015 3:10:00 AM)

    Dreams of love and, the petals of love; with a poetic version to touch the hearts. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 21,340 Points .., Rahman .., Henry (10/13/2015 12:43:00 AM)

    I like to rate this poem 10 out of 10....cheersssss! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 21,340 Points .., Rahman .., Henry (10/13/2015 12:42:00 AM)

    Seductive piece of poetic version. In deed, a god job. Lovely to read and enjoy. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Michael Harmon (9/8/2009 10:52:00 PM)

    An erotic masterpiece, George. Truly, a 'flogging' of The Goddess! (lol) . (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Bob Blackwell (8/2/2009 5:34:00 AM)

    A Lotus grows in mud and is a flower of great beauty, It provides the fragrance of love for all to enjoy, so I don't think it would mind a tongue lashing George, a lovely poem with an ironic ending why? regards Bob (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Anjali Sinha (8/1/2009 6:14:00 AM)

    nice poem
    but highly sensuous
    a tenner for you
    10 anjali (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eddie Roa (1/21/2009 5:18:00 PM)

    I like the lyrical and sensual quality of this piece. nice work George. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 145 Points Nimal Dunuhinga (10/29/2006 1:55:00 AM)

    Lotus is a flower which blooms in mud; every flower brings agony and ecstasy?
    George it's emotional and thanks very much. (Report) Reply

Read all 11 comments »

What do you think this poem is about?

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 17, 2006

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 20, 2010

[Hata Bildir]