Lost You Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Lost You

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O' darling! Look- the sun on your forehead
It smiles with your heart touching smiling,
cannot turn eyes from your hair parting.
White snow is swaying with your face
All of me are captivated in your loving chin
I've lost all my sight, lost wink of touching

O' darling! Look- the river of spring is flowing
with you, slow walking to your still footprint,
Slow tone is heard in warm chirping of bird
through mild breeze, the fragrances come
I walk as your breathless acceptation
I've lost my known-unknown loving pillar

O' darling! Look at this- you've stopped here
in long queer gardens of the silent body
Covered world of green grass is calling you
Where the soil drinks the freezing blood
And meat from bone gulps down leisurely
I've lost here being-less body in the love

-March 10,2018 Chattogram

Friday, March 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love,death,friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 08 March 2020

Footprints of lost love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 April 2019

White ''snow'' is swaying with your face WOW really WOW lovely expression was delighted to read Kumaramani's comment wonderful poet first on PH UR so lucky

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 November 2018

O' darling! Look- the sun on your forehead It smiles with your heart touching smiling, cannot turn eyes from your hair parting. White snow is swaying with your face All of me are captivated in your loving chin I've lost all my sight, lost wink of touching.....fantastic beginning like a fountain from the top. Thanks for sharing.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 March 2018

Mahtab, such a lovely write👍👍👍

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