Oscar Aceves

Rookie (Feb-19-92 / Los Angeles)

Lost Without A Moon - Poem by Oscar Aceves

Where has this moon gone?
the moon that used to brighten up
the night sky,
And the moon that used to shine
Brighter than any star,
The moon that used to bring to me
This beautiful light,
For this moon used to lighten up
My heart,
Now that this moon is gone
I must rely on the stars
to bring me light,
This moon left me alone,
alone to suffer and think
empty thoughts,
And now i know that
I am lost,
Oh where has this moon gone?


Comments about Lost Without A Moon by Oscar Aceves

  • Terry Craddock Terry Craddock (9/20/2015 12:01:00 AM)

    Lost Without Moonlight

    when lost
    without
    the beauty
    of moonlight

    we must
    embrace
    the beauty
    of a dark

    satin black night
    appreciating the dark
    of the solitary night

    we create our own light
    dance in the burning light
    we are moonlight radiant


    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'Lost Without A Moon' by Oscar Aceves.
    Dedicated to the poet Oscar Aceves. (Report) Reply

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  • Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (9/18/2015 11:50:00 PM)

    The poem unfolds a stage where life has gone into a long phase of loneliness and solitude. This is painful and heartfelt. (Report) Reply

  • Terry Craddock Terry Craddock (9/18/2015 5:43:00 PM)

    when lost without the beauty of moonlight, we must embrace the beauty of a dark satin black night, appreciating the dark of the night we create our own light (Report) Reply

  • Jillian Jillian (9/18/2015 4:57:00 PM)

    Rely on the planets and the stars. It's also good to make the trip in daylight first before making it in the dark.

    I've been watching the moon for years, enjoying it's stateliness, studying it phases and orbit. It appears that we lose the moon; we leave it behind, in the dust, so to speak. (Report) Reply

  • David Wood David Wood (9/18/2015 10:22:00 AM)

    You will just have to grope in the dark. Its more fun! Good poem keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Babatunde Aremu Babatunde Aremu (9/18/2015 5:57:00 AM)

    Beautiful! The moon can mean so many things. The star brings hope. very figurative. Check-out my poem: Beautiful Moon. Keep on writing, poet (Report) Reply

  • Janet B (12/25/2009 1:54:00 PM)

    I wrote a music to this lyrics. (Report) Reply

  • ~ Evelina Kononenko ~ (5/29/2009 5:38:00 PM)

    I love this poem its so nice it reminds me of my life without noone beside me
    wow asome Im Evelina am am 12 years old i write poems too (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 10, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 23, 2011


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