Lost Minds Poem by A Dark Lifetime ...

Lost Minds

Rating: 5.0


Its enough to fool them all
Its enough to stand tall
Its enough to dropp the ball
Once...
And you will fall

Unstable, blur
Like her, like her
Inside me she is growing
Inside me something is going...
Going down, down, down

Hands are shaking
Lifes are making
Hearts are breaking
Minds are getting colder and colder now

Cold enough to take your last breath

Breathe, breathe colder now

Looks like you are crazy somehow

Once...
And we all fell...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sahra Hussein 10 February 2015

Unstable, blur Like her, like her Inside me she is growing Inside me something is going... Going down, down, dow Like it!

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Gajanan Mishra 09 January 2013

Cold enough to take your last breath. very good poem. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Nader Baheri 30 December 2012

a masterpiece of art.wonderful.i like the musical semantic.especially the first part.~nb

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