Lost Love Poem by robert delucchi

Lost Love

Rating: 4.8


LOST LOVE

My days are spent
Sitting, watching, waiting
Suspended in time and space
Like a dandelion seed
Bobbing, drifting, blowing
Through the endlessness of time
Knowing that time washes
From the heart
The stain of pain
Like the timeless
Motion of the ocean
Pounding, crashing, caressing
The wind swept shore

Then comes sleep
Restful peaceful sleep
I find cool comfort
In the linen slips
It removes the hurt for awhile

Then the awakening
The awareness and numbness
The pain still foremost in my being
Thoughts flash heart aches
The longing for
And the knowing
The not sharing anymore
Our dreams of tomorrow
Are all gone
Yet life as they all say
Must carry on

Then as a breath that gently
Caresses a candles flame
And puts it out in whisper
So the pain leaves
Leaves me warm and glowing
Glowing with the knowing
That I have not lost
But gained
From the love that we had................

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alf Hutchison 14 April 2009

Robert this is fantastic writing... not wishy washy...but so beautifully real...your aching is tangible... lets have more 10+++ regards Alf

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Bob Blackwell 14 April 2009

Written wil lots of heart felt love, your writing is so beautiful.

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Stephen Stirk 20 February 2009

Great imagery and description, . You couldn't help but appreciate this poem. A really good read Steve

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Patrick McFarland 20 February 2009

This is excellent work Robert. A thoroughly enjoyable read.

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