Lost Lilac Poem by Sanjukta Nag

Lost Lilac

Rating: 4.8


While raking the bottom of my heart
Carpeted with yellowed withered leaves,
A flicker of hope
Searches for the pink lilac,
That fell from the branch of our love
During the bleak blizzard
Of our long term frozen relationship.

Wednesday, October 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: heartbreak
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 19 November 2016

Heartfelt poem, in love one should have patience to overcome the heartbreak.

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Sranisha Francis 27 October 2015

very nice.................

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Ratnakar Mandlik 08 October 2015

Flow of emotions with great intensity is evident in the poem. Search for the rays of hopes that is pink lilac adds a nice flavor to the poem on the whole. Ten points. Thanks for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 07 October 2015

Wonderfully depicted, metaphorical poem, Sanjukta. Thanks

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 October 2015

Wish you two help to revive the relationship and stay blessed. Beautiful! !

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