Lost In Paradise Poem by Ryan Waldron

Lost In Paradise

Rating: 5.0


Today I got lost in paradise
it didn't last long but it sure was nice
the world seemed to slow and almost stop
there was so much beauty being on top

the mountain was high and the climb was rough
but i knew it would be worth it if I just tried enough
finally i reached the peak and on the other side
that's when I got lost in paradise

the view was great and the beauty was deep
the edge of the cliff was jagged and steep
but as I was told you were waiting for me
that's the first time I could actually see

The sky was blue as it kissed the sea
almost like that spot was made for you and me
with endless beauty amongst the trees
and the birds flying with the breeze

I sat down beside you my hand on your knee
slowly you turned and smiled at me
I smiled back and looked you in the eyes
and that's when I got lost in paradise

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Qutaiba AlRefaei 15 August 2009

Hello, Wow, I have to say that's a great one, the kind I like to read, similar to my style of writing though I don't post much in here, Like the sky kissed the sea... that's just an insanely amazing way to describe it, Nice imagination, you actually took me there, perfectly executed the image, Not to forget, the title is also good, I personally pick a poem to read by its title, so it's something important, Have a nice day.

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