! ! ! ! Lost In City Lights- Haiku! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! Lost In City Lights- Haiku! ! ! !

Rating: 3.1


Neon lights, pubs and malls,
bewildered small town girl
slips out- where night sky...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Nandy 09 March 2009

How true! The city lights have dazzled me for long! Now I cease to be impressed by them any more! Instead, I have moved out under the open sky and gaze up in amazement at God's galaxies - those 'star cities' in space beckon to me! Which made me to compose three poems -based on Astronomy! Hope you will like them, Mata ji? For your poem 10! From - Raj Nandy!

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 14 March 2009

A nice haiku with hidden meanings. Title itself is very catchy and meaningful.

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Hari Khabrani 21 March 2009

sudden astonishment on merry and alive styles. Well poem written being Japanese style.

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the heat and cold...of these two lights...the village girl feels at home with th sky

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Obinna Eruchie 23 May 2009

a lovely haiku on the city lights that astonish the small town girl.

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Allemagne Roßmann 02 September 2011

Very powerful in brevity of words...

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Yelena M. 03 June 2010

Wow, the title was immediately captured by my eye, and the content is a perfect haiku.Thanks for sharing, Mamta. With best wishes, Yelena.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 08 April 2010

Wow! Splendid…and exquisite Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Seema Chowdhury 09 March 2010

very nice Haiku indeed. colorful and bright. take care see my new poems of 2010 on pg1

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Ranjit Ravindran 07 November 2009

Beautiful...crisp & hit point blank. We lose all senses amidst these invading artificial lights. Loved it Ma'am, Ranjit.

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