Lost Dream Poem by Kranthi Pothineni
Lost Dream
Its a beautiful dream
Like a crimson sun
On a milky blue sky
Birds flying to home
And myself in Rome
Its a beautiful dream
Like silver cloud line
To mounted dark cloud
Light kissing the head
And myself on rose bed
Its a beautiful dream
Like shining dew drop
On a lush green grass
Bright day smiling
And myself flying
Its a beautiful dream
Like a new born cub
In hands of young love
Tears flowing in joy
And myself with toys
Its a beautiful dream
Like a painless sleep
On a dry soft pillow
Night not slept slow
And myself out of flow
Its a beautiful dream
Like full moon night
On a artful dark sky
Dogs stopped scream
And myself out of dream
Now you have penned a sweet flowing words and very nice to read aloud...............loved it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
The similes that are used for the descriptions of the lost dream are wonderful, the rhymes are very well chosen and the message of the poem is very well revealed....10++++
instead of lost dream, it should have been called 'beautiful dream'. because it is beautiful another ten
I am very sure and sincerely wish with all my heart that your dreams will come in to reality. Every one dreams, and we always get feeling that. oh gosh I am just dreaming, it is never gona come true... but if you work towards them, you might be able to turn those dreams to real.. this is very good writing, nice composition...10 best wishes and warm regards shan
a very nice poem, beautiful in composition.nice flow and finish too.thanx for sharing. voted10 surya
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/22/2024 12:17:10 PM # 1.0.0.1119
You captured the dreams in quite a pleasant flow of Poetry. Nice to read.......