Lost Poem by Celest McBride

Lost

Rating: 4.5


She never seemed happy anymore,
A smile rarely touched her face.
She was always crying behind her closed door,
No more angel, and no more grace.

She never felt like she was wanted,
Only the cemetery screamed her name.
Her mind was haunted,
Was this how it felt to be insane?

Until he came along and changed it
Who would’ve known she could make a sound
He never yelled, and he never hit
With him she felt like she was found

Tuesday, June 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love,sad
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this is a poem about how I felt on a daily basis. There's no real reason behind my feelings. I just felt this way, until I met a special person who changed it and made everything better for me. They'll never know how much they helped me, but I will forever know which is the best part of it.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 11 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Celest. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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