Lost Poem by October Freeman

Lost

Rating: 5.0


I am not lost in a bad way,
Nor am I lost in a good way.

I am lost in your eyes,
And I am lost in my heart.

I am lost in my dreams of you,
And I am lost in my thoughts of you.

I am lost in a labyrinth of feelings.
I am not lost in confusion.
I am lost in love.
I am lost.
And I don't mind...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A powerful paradoxical poem. Well done my friend.

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a fine job indeed....... you did a good job at this poem

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That was quite romantic. And beautifully short and sweet. Another good poem.

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Lady Grace 04 April 2010

nicely done...hmmmm...welcome to ph..

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Tobias Gray 03 April 2010

very beautiful! so sweet! 10+!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 April 2010

I am lost in a labyrinth of feelings. I am not lost in confusion. I am lost in love. I am lost. And I don't mind...and i am lost in you dear daughter for explaning so simple in words... lovely crafted one and u have still miles to go to, realise it... keep good work on and pse save your heart from falling.....10 read mine.. love at first sight... mary to marry..... i miss... miss i miss u

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