Lost Poem by Tina MacAdam

Lost

Rating: 4.5


a swing
empty
rusting
abandoned

a playhouse
deserted
silent
dusty

a house
dismal
cold
quiet

a person
broken
defeated
hopeless

a memory
chilling
disturbing
terrifying

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Blue Eyes 10 November 2009

terrific work of art i love it though it is kind of short.

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Tracy Scheepers 09 November 2009

The words you have used to describe your feelings are very effective. Cool poem.

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Sandhya S N 09 November 2009

you told a lot with those words brilliant effort regards sandhya

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