Loosing Time Poem by Zakk Burck

Loosing Time

Rating: 2.7


She sadly waits in bed,
She starts to see what’s in her head.
They say she can’t do as she’d please,
No matter how much that she’d pleed.

She can’t remember yesterday,
All she knows is nothing went about her way.
She’ll never find the ones she loves,
They’re all flying higher than the doves.

She needs away out from it all,
Her guardians won’t save her a dime.
Her spirit wouldn’t break her fall,
But sadlly she’s loosing time.

But as her time ticks away,
She can’t seem to change her ways.
But she can’t controll what’s inside,
She just feels that she can see when you died.

She can’t feel a thing inside her head,
But the pain in her heart makes her wish to be dead.
She cant live in sorrow with out a doubt,
So she takes the gun… times out.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soul Writer 21 April 2009

Interesting story and well written. Thanks for sharing =) SW

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Zakk Burck

Zakk Burck

Cincinnati, Ohio
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